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15-06-2005, 10:38 AM
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mc_Ladyp ur a jowka
but ur lyricz stil sound gud
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23-06-2005, 12:08 PM
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lol, if no1s gonna start off ill try, lol, dont take the piss tho i aint battled in a while, here goes nuttin..................
my magic rap tactics//
baffle chicks, an scratch plastic//
rattle sh*t so hard, i burn like acid//
deep like lake placid, da meanest Sexy Beast//
to ever get on a forum,i break jaw, an replace it for 'em,//
theres real mc's, we call em ME//
coz im basically, reportedly, the un-orderly law,
i dont need permission, to heed my vision,
u dont like it, fu*k u, nuffin im missin,
got u in positionz, that got ur heart switchin, left eye twitchin,
bit*hin bout how im wack n shit, dude jus listin,
thats actor shit//
dis aint hollywood, if u sold, its probarly wood,
an yea i probarly would, knock on ur front on door, wid a chainsaw to ya ballz,
screamin' ya mothers a wh*re,
coz before i finish rap,
im gonna finish gats, no guns, jus peace,
no pieces,
rap speeches, im preaching,
lemme hear u clap,
now start breathin',
all of this heat, in under 16bars//
get dazed up like its a whisky bar//
an if i get a mic, then its " E .R "
p.s no hate towards those who choose 2 reply to this, its jus a rhyme, not directed at anyone...
take care and god bless
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23-06-2005, 12:11 PM
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#18 (permalink)
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hahahaha
some of the words i used (swear words) have been replaced wid sum gay sh*t, so jus try an imagine a swear word there lol - I'm gay  , instead of sum other sh*t, otherwise u wont catch da flow...
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23-06-2005, 12:16 PM
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i changed my mind, my rap dont sound as gud, cuz half ma words wer changed!!!
sooo i fink i will post another freestlye, which has no swear word, therefore it wont b edited!!
aite..here we go...
Aiyo i been unda strain, since i seen tha dayz//
i feel so un-eased, when police restrain //
Please my people! jus relase the pain//
coz u never know if we'll meet again//
an i hate poverty circles, where money is hope //
coz i know sex sells coz honeyz is dope//
an i write every bit of this sh*t as a quote //
sometimes i'm choked up at the back of my throat //
it might be pollution, coz we up in the smoke //
the gun smoke, coming like a weed circle u tote //
for when people get cocky, an they start to provoke //
the fricition builds between you and you start to erode //
this might be the realest rap i ever wrote //
an i got more flows than the waves beneath a boat //
an to be serious... //
people get delirious //
they hear my rhymes, an say dey aint feeling us //
but yo i dont worry //
coz i'm nowhere in a hurry //
they hear the term asian an start to think-a curry //
you find it quite funny, but yo i think itz useless //
coz they want money so they try and use us //
and when it comes to favourites they never try and choose us //
i bet you never knew i woz a first class producer //
give cold stares like my name woz medusa //
yo you could never sell, you'd need a few boosterz //
...hehe..
I thort i'd go serious for a bit , since, my last rhyme seemed so weak (due 2 edited words), i just wanted ppl 2 know i can rhyme..
take care and god bless
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23-06-2005, 07:44 PM
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Originally Posted by mc_ladyp
ahh-thu :P
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hehe ya jokaaaa¬!
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25-06-2005, 03:13 PM
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OK..OK...i thought everyone would think this is a bad idea but here goes if you wanna start it up again:
Ill say this onetime so you don’t forget
Steppin up is something you will regret
Don’t fret blood coz that aint a threat
It’s a promise
You be slew by the tme you say mic check
Im spitting lyrics to the high heaven#
My tounge is like Gibson in lethal weapon
My advice to you is to stop yoself stepping
Im plottin jacking ones like oceans eleven
Now listen, you could either comprehend this,
Or compliment this. Either way its all authentic
You can bet your balls I meant it.
Talkin off balls you should know the rule
You cant step if you aint got testicles
You best have big ones to call me a fool.
So run along to where your sposed to be
In your cot at home you aint close to me
Im the greatest yer im the rap ali
For shizzle and you’re a nobody
So piss off now with your bloods bandana
This aint the states and this aint your manor
U cant touch this once said mc hammer
When you step in my manor have some manners
adress me by sir, be on your ps and qs
and don’t forget your please and thankyous
remember its sir to you
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26-06-2005, 02:18 PM
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wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dubz berry nyc wel dun
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27-06-2005, 09:29 AM
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ill b defo duin dat coz mc ladyp woz tellin me u wana mc on dat fing
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27-06-2005, 10:55 AM
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Sounds good ... Look forward to receiving your material and having a listen! Spread the word ... Wheres the next freestyler??? Bring it on then!
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27-06-2005, 11:41 AM
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y'all r whack n fictitious
ya gonna get damaged n finished
dependin on how many minutes u last in the path of the illest
n what i spit is major shit so i guess im sumthin malicious
dont act drunk n start dissin
slow ya role, play ya position
thinkin its cute when u dispute a member of the true hip hop coallition
a few of u get dropped for suspicion 4 mockin my mission
sobbin n bitchin
"when naf reaches the top we shud kill him"
i only associate with the illest at my level or better
women turn 2 my rhymes as alternatives 2 sexual pleasure
what can i say my voice is the getter
my flow, even better
my breath controls incredible
n my skill level just gets em wetter
its inevitable, feelins get hurt when i spit
bustaz wanna throw fists cos they cant handle a diss
i dont walk around like im tough talkin bout i b clappin
but dont f**k with me boys cos 'accidents' do happen
ya whack n u choose rappin
u lack what im packin
u think u can rap? spit sum more shit so i can continue laughin....
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27-06-2005, 01:40 PM
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hai hai!! ^^wicked naf!!
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27-06-2005, 03:24 PM
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yes yes my fellow mc kaured- gwaan people we are here to back you all the way! Just click on the URL and dont be shy  !!
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27-06-2005, 06:57 PM
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hey jus readin ur mc's dis aint mine but 1 of ma m8s he woz havin a batte wiv dis boi read it c wat u fink,,
Yo BIGGY!!!!
go get jiggy wiv ya own gurl
oh ye u ay gt 1
so dude afta dis u betta run
im a settle da score 4 ya now
man im gna end dis wiv a phat ass POW!!!
Who u tryin to fool by havin Navdeep as a stage name,
pussssy assS fool tryin to make it in da rap game
come on..ur gonna have to do better son,
at the end of this battle I'l send u back to where u came from
So wen I spit on the microphone my style is exquisite,
from the looks of it this is a website that only u and ur friends visit!
Now its time that wit my lyrics I start to tear it up,
When I look in all the freestyle rooms its always u gettin ****ed!
So Navdeep why is ur gurl askin me to get married,
and how come in every battle ur always gettin buried?
So many questions and so little time,
Sorry am I hittin where it hurts Navdeep with my vicious rhyme?
OK..i'l relax it there I dont wanna kill it,
i'l limit my damage by keepin to ur line limit!
YE BOW! CMON NAVDEEP, GTTA DO BETTA BLUD!!
IM WAITIN'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tic tok da clok goes clinkity clok, i see navdeep tryin 2 rok, i advise u n ure kind to go an flok, as im da 1 hu rules da roost, ye it means i mite need a extra boost, yo keep it simple bruv, no familys n den i woh have to send u up above...
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28-06-2005, 11:47 AM
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Ek roti, Do roti, Theen roti, Char
Ek roti, Do roti, Theen roti, Char;
I dont want my aloo gobi sabji
Jus gimme the achar ...
Ek roti, Do roti, Theen roti, Char
Ek roti, Do roti, Theen roti, Char;
Im munchin, Im munchin yes Im munchin
Im munchin, Im munchin yes Im munchin ...
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